A Youth Mowing
There are four men mowing down by the Isar;
I can hear the swish of the scythe-strokes, four
Sharp breaths taken: yea, and I
Am sorry for what's in store.
The first man out of the four that's mowing
Is mine, I claim him once and for all;
Though it's sorry I am, on his young feet, knowing
None of the trouble he's led to stall.
As he sees me bringing the dinner, he lifts
His head as proud as a deer that looks
Shoulder-deep out of the corn; and wipes
His scythe-blade bright, unhooks
The scythe-stone and over the stubble to me.
Lad, thou hast gotten a child in me,
Laddie, a man thou'lt ha'e to be,
Yea, though I'm sorry for thee.
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I just recently began enjoying poetry so I don’t have a favorite poet. I remember some poems of Robert Louis Stevenson from childhood that have always been favorite. “The Swing” is one I’ve always enjoyed.
thats a beauty bev, I also like that one, thank you.
Your poem ‘A Youth Mowing’ beautifully transforms a simple pastoral scene into a meditation on life’s fragility. The swish of the scythe, the breath of the workers, and the claim of the first youth evoke both tenderness and sorrow. That line — ‘the first man out of the four that’s mowing is mine’ — carries a haunting intimacy, reminding us how deeply we connect with fleeting human moments. Your words show that even ordinary labor can become a mirror of profound emotion.
yes indeed hary, the imagery in that one is particularly special, as are you for this kind comment.
Endless thanks 🙏
Like rivers that forever run,
My gratitude shines like the sun
always a pleasure hary, take care.
(｡♥‿♥｡) → Emotional, loving appreciation
any time friend.
I remain indebted to your kindness.
always a pleasure hary.
Dear Billy,
Is that a poem by D H Lawrence? It seems so but I want to be sure 🌹🌺
yes indeed it is my friend.
I am rather fond of Mr Lawrence, I always think there is something for everyone in his work. “Self Pity” being my favourite 😀
me too Charlie, thanks mate..
Just saying hello.. keep up the great work.. I enjoy your blog..
awe cheers mate, very kind, have a good one..